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这个简单句太多。不怎么好改，似乎整个全得改
playwithaSantaClaus好象不用a的吧
OnDecember25theveryyear,theentireWesternworldcelebratesChristmas.ThisdaymarksthebirthofJesusChrist,whowasthefounderofChristianity.
这样的句子似乎好点，你不妨用用
（挑的错好又多的我会再给加悬赏的）！！！我的作文：ChristmasisaveryimportantWesternfestiral.AtChristmas.Peopledon'twork.TheygetreadyforChristmas.TheybuyChritmastrees.TheybuysomeChristmascardsandsomegiftsfortheirfriends.Theybuysomecolourfullights,too.TheyputuptheChristmastrees.Theygettogetherandsingsongs.SomechildrenplaywithaSantaClaus.Theyfeelveryhappy.