我写了一篇题目为"Christmas day"的英语60词的小作文,想请各位高手帮帮忙,看看我哪里写错了!!!——

发布于2022-01-13 21:52:57

(挑的错好又多的我会再给加悬赏的)!!!我的作文:Christmas is a very important Western festiral.At Christmas. People don't work.They get ready for Christmas. They buy Chritmas trees.They buy some Christmas cards and some gifts for their friends.They buy some colourful lights,too.They put up the Christmas trees.They get together and sing songs.Some children play with a Santa Claus.They feel very happy.

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网友回答2022-01-13
这个简单句太多。不怎么好改,似乎整个全得改
play with a Santa Claus好象不用a的吧

On December 25th every year, the entire Western world celebrates Christmas. This day marks the birth of Jesus Christ, who was the founder of Christianity. 
这样的句子似乎好点,你不妨用用

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